This week I'd like you to read chapter 1 and 2 of To Kill A Mockingbird by Friday and watch my lecture notes below.. You can also watch the
movie on Amazon for free if you have AMAZON PRIME or you can rent it for
$3.99.
Study Questions:
Chapters 1-4 Questions
What is the background of the Finch family? Where did they come from?
List three allusions from Chapter 1.
Who is Dill? What is Dill like?
How does the book start with a foreshadow?
What happens at school during Scout's first day?
Who is Calpurnia? What is her place in the Finch household?
What is Walter Cunningham like? What does his behaviour during lunch suggest about his home life?
What do you think of the way Atticus treats Walter?
Does Scout learn anything from Walter's visit? What do you think this is?
Atticus says that you never really understand a person “until you climb
into his skin and walk around in it”. What does this mean? Is it an easy
thing for Scout to learn? (In the last chapter of the novel, Scout
repeats this, but she changes “skin” to “shoes” - this is probably not a
mistake: Harper Lee suggests that Scout cannot clearly recall exactly
what Atticus said and when, but the reader can check this!)
What do you learn in this chapter about the Ewells?
Today we are going to finish speeches and move on.
This week I'd like you to read chapter 1 and 2 of To Kill A Mockingbird by Friday and watch my lecture notes below.. You can also watch the
movie on Amazon for free if you have AMAZON PRIME or you can rent it for
$3.99.
Study Questions:
Chapters 1-4 Questions
What is the background of the Finch family? Where did they come from?
List three allusions from Chapter 1.
Who is Dill? What is Dill like?
How does the book start with a foreshadow?
What happens at school during Scout's first day?
Who is Calpurnia? What is her place in the Finch household?
What is Walter Cunningham like? What does his behaviour during lunch suggest about his home life?
What do you think of the way Atticus treats Walter?
Does Scout learn anything from Walter's visit? What do you think this is?
Atticus says that you never really understand a person “until you climb
into his skin and walk around in it”. What does this mean? Is it an easy
thing for Scout to learn? (In the last chapter of the novel, Scout
repeats this, but she changes “skin” to “shoes” - this is probably not a
mistake: Harper Lee suggests that Scout cannot clearly recall exactly
what Atticus said and when, but the reader can check this!)
What do you learn in this chapter about the Ewells?
Today you need to resubmit your essays to me. If you don't send them
to me again I will be counting them late. Also, we will be putting
essays on note cards and discussing what I will be looking for in your
presentations.
We will present these on
Wednesday. Once you have them on note cards I need you to begin
practicing presenting. You should get into groups to do this.
ORAL RUBRIC
Criteria
Exceeds Standard
(4)
Meets Standard
(3)
Needs
Improvement (2)
Volume: How well
you can be heard
Voice is loud
and clear without the student yelling.All words are heard.Student
projects words from their diaphragm.
Voice is loud
throughout most of presentation.One
or more words might be lost because of projection of volume, but the idea is
still clear.
Voice fades in
places so that the listener loses or misses parts of the presentation, or
parts of the idea
Pronunciation: How
well you say all your words
Words are
pronounced perfectly and sentences flow off of tongue
The speaker
trips in one or two places either in the pronunciation of a word or in
reading a sentence.The presentation
is effected only slightly by the mistakes.
The speaker
trips in quite a few places.The
presentation is effected more than slightly by the mistakes.Mistakes either make the presentation hard
to listen to or cloud the ideas of the writing
Tone: Do you
vary how you say your sentences
Speaker as
Actor:The speaker’s delivery makes
the writing come alive by giving it emotion, character, emphasis, by
breathing life into it
Speaker varies
most of sentences to express emotion or to emphasis importance of parts, but
there are still places when the speaker spoke in a lifeless monotone
Speaker speaks
in a monotone that reveals no emotion or does not emphasis any importance on
any idea
UHMS or AHS
NONE
1 or 2 but the
uhms or ahs do not distract the presentation
3 or more uhms
or ahs
Eye Contact: do
you look at your audience
The speaker made
a point to look at everyone in the room and rarely looked as if they were
reading from a paper
Some eye contact
is made, but mostly the presenter read off of his or her paper
Today you need to resubmit your essays to me. If you don't send them to me again I will be counting them late. Also, we will be putting essays on note cards and discussing what I will be looking for in your presentations.
We will present these on
Wednesday. Once you have them on note cards I need you to begin
practicing presenting. You should get into groups to do this.
ORAL RUBRIC
Criteria
Exceeds Standard
(4)
Meets Standard
(3)
Needs
Improvement (2)
Volume: How well
you can be heard
Voice is loud
and clear without the student yelling.All words are heard.Student
projects words from their diaphragm.
Voice is loud
throughout most of presentation.One
or more words might be lost because of projection of volume, but the idea is
still clear.
Voice fades in
places so that the listener loses or misses parts of the presentation, or
parts of the idea
Pronunciation: How
well you say all your words
Words are
pronounced perfectly and sentences flow off of tongue
The speaker
trips in one or two places either in the pronunciation of a word or in
reading a sentence.The presentation
is effected only slightly by the mistakes.
The speaker
trips in quite a few places.The
presentation is effected more than slightly by the mistakes.Mistakes either make the presentation hard
to listen to or cloud the ideas of the writing
Tone: Do you
vary how you say your sentences
Speaker as
Actor:The speaker’s delivery makes
the writing come alive by giving it emotion, character, emphasis, by
breathing life into it
Speaker varies
most of sentences to express emotion or to emphasis importance of parts, but
there are still places when the speaker spoke in a lifeless monotone
Speaker speaks
in a monotone that reveals no emotion or does not emphasis any importance on
any idea
UHMS or AHS
NONE
1 or 2 but the
uhms or ahs do not distract the presentation
3 or more uhms
or ahs
Eye Contact: do
you look at your audience
The speaker made
a point to look at everyone in the room and rarely looked as if they were
reading from a paper
Some eye contact
is made, but mostly the presenter read off of his or her paper
Today we are going to read "PAIN" and look at an Informative Speech, and then work on essays. Remember you are going to have to delivery your essay to class as a speech after Spring Break.
Unit
Learning goal:Students will be able to research, write and perform an
original expository essay that informs or explains some idea, task, or problem
of the student’s choice.
Scale/Rubric
relating to learning goal:
4 – The student can write and perform an original
expository speech that both informs/explains and persuades some idea or problem
of that the student is interested in.The writing and performance are both exemplarily effective.
3 – The student is able to write an original expository
speech that informs or explains something that the student is interested in.
2 – With some direction/help from the teacher the student
is able to write an original expository speech that informs or explains
something that the student is interested in.
1 – Even with help from the teacher the student is unable
to write an original expository speech that informs or explains something that
the student is interested in.
Students will be able to
1)Write a hook, thesis statement, and order of development
2)Organize an essay according to introductory paragraph, body paragraphs and conclusion
3)Write a proper conclusion
4)Use specifics to back up ideas
5)Use the order of development as a map for the essay
6)Cite sources according to proper MLA format
7)Deliver
a speech by making eye contact, using proper pronunciation and
effective enunciation, and avoiding the use of “uhms” or other filler
words or sounds.
Handout
– “The elements of effective expository writing”
Sample
Essays: “Campus Racism 101” – Nikki Giovanni; “The Truth About Lying” – Judith
Viorst; “Pain” – Diane Ackerman.
ESSENTIAL CONCEPTS:
How
do you inform someone about an issue, or explain to someone how to do something?
What makes a speech effective?What are you passionate about?How can you show that to someone?
Essential Questions:
What makes a good hook? What makes a strong thesis statement
or conclusion? What makes a memorable essay or speech?
MLA
1) Last Name/First Name of Author
2) Title of article or title of webpage
3) Title of book or website
4) Place of publication
5) Publisher
6) Date of publication
7) Page number
8) Source of publication (example: Web, Print, DVD, etc)
9) (Internet) Date of access.
go here for sample MLA Citation pages or in-text citations.
Here are two short - but decent - videos are in-text citations and works cited page
Go HERE and Also go here for an additional video on WORKS CITED PAGE
The best place to go for help with MLA structure or any other essay question is Purdue OWL online.
For Parallel Structure go HERE
Intro:
*Immediately engage reader (attention getter)
·get the reader “in the
ballpark”
*Establish context
(topic of essay)
·usually 2-3 sentences narrowing
down to the point of the paper
·cite your source with title and
author (if using one source)
*Strong &
complete thesis statement
Body:
*Begin paragraphs with a clear, concise topic
sentence
·*Use
concrete details(CD)
·these include facts or quotes
·cite sources when necessary
(simplified: such as author’s last name & pg #)
·*Create insightful commentary to support concrete details (2-3
comments per CD)
·shoot for at least 2 CD per
paragraph (+ commentary)
Conclusion:
*Transition into summary of key points
*Restate thesis (say it another way!)
*Refer
back to the attention getter and tie things up
*Answer “So what?”
·Leave reader feeling persuaded or
at least challenged
·This personal comment can include
a universal observation
(a prediction), a call to action (a recommendation) or a scare
(a veiled threat)
Suggested sentence
starter for commentary:
“This shows that…” (eventually teach kids
to eliminate it)
“This proves that…”
“This demonstrates that…”
Suggested sentence
starters for conclusion:
“We need to…”
“It’s our
responsibility to …”
“It’s important
to…”
“In order to______,
we must…”
“It would be to our
benefit to…”
Encourage:
Incorporate transitions
Use high-level vocab
Vary sentence patterns
Create a strong “voice”
*The number of paragraphs
and the organization of the essay will vary.
Expository
Essay Rubric
Thesis
Organization
Evidence
(Concrete
Details)
Analysis
(Commentary)
Style/Audience
Conventions
4
The thesis
statement is clear, well-developed and relevant to the topic.It is engaging.
Transitions
within and between paragraphs flow smoothly
There are
three well chosen, concrete details/evidence from the text in each paragraph.
** The concrete details support the thesis
All commentary
synthesizes and supports the thesis statement. **
The style
is engaging and effective
The essay
contains few if any errors in the conventions* of the English language
3
The thesis
statement is clear and relevant to the topic
There
structure within paragraphs is easy to follow
There are
two to three details from the text.The details support the thesis.
Some or
most of the commentary explains concrete details and supports the thesis
The style
is appropriate for an academic paper
The essay
contains some errors in the conventions of the English language.Errors do not interfere with the reader’s
understanding of the essay.
2
The thesis
is not relevant to topic or is not clear
The essay
is missing an introduction, body or concluding paragraph
There are
some concrete details.
Commentary
is either unclear or irrelevant and does not support the thesis
They style
is sometimes appropriate for an academic paper.
The essay
contains several errors in the conventions of the English language.